I changed the scene breaks into chapter breaks. As a result what were three chapters are now seven chapters.
I finished chapter eight.
I'm now 138 words into chapter nine.
The system primary, the star around which everything orbited, gave off a red tinted light of variable brightness. It was the kind of light that hack writers on the mother planet who were very short on personal funds would write extremely long paragraphs on their extremely old manual typewriters in order to explain the effects of it on the landscape.
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